under the bed kahi

Under the Bed A boy called Michael was hopping into bed to sleep because it was 9:30pm, past his bedtime, so he went to bed. Suddenly he heard a whisper say “Michael”, so he peeped under to see what it was. When Michael peeped to see what was under the bed, his heart dropped. It was a creepy dark man with a knife, staring at Michael with a big smile laughing. Michael didn't know what to do because Michael’s parents weren’t home, so he stayed in bed waiting until the morning but couldn’t hear it anymore, so he looked under to see, but couldn’t see anything.     

WALT:
We are learning to use vocab in our writing.

This is the work I have written and edited myself. It is still a work in progress.


Question: whats your biggest fear.

Reflection: It was hard writing it because it took me forever trying to figure was a monster could be.